Feedback for Liam and Tom :D

This so far is a very good start to a film opening, however it does still have work needed to be done. The first thing I noticed what you may need to change or sort out, is to make it clear that there’s an argument going on and its not just background noise. Also make it clear whom the argument is between. Another thing I noticed was that a lot of the shots taken where in “long shot”, so maybe you should use a larger range of angles and shots, experiment more as you want to draw the audience in. I noticed that the music you have chosen to use fits in well and makes your opening a lot more interesting. Maybe have a bit more going on than just walking, tell the characters story, you could do this by putting a voice over it. I really liked the shot of tom walking and the cars and bikes were going past, I thought this looked really effective. You probably already know but you need to add titles and maybe a few more shots, which aren’t just walking. Overall this is very good so far, well done guys :)!

L3 - GROUP 3 (Tom & Liam) Fim Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.